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Abigail Thomas's avatar

Oh dear. Then what?

Linda McCauley Freeman's avatar

We are drawn in to wanting to know more. This is just a tease not a fleshed out story with consequences.

Judith Van Praag's avatar

The End, like a short story, leaving us wanting (to know) more. Who can beat that?

Dianne Moritz's avatar

Don't we all? It is intoxicating to meet someone who finds you attractive and who showers you with compliments.....

Michele Peters's avatar

Part 2, please! Seriously, though, great writing by Kate Manning.

Nancy Brier's avatar

My eyes flew down the page. Story telling at its best.